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questions:Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

Nowadays, it is believed that the Internet is crucial to our daily lives, because people in the modern cities could not live without it. Someone holds the opinion that the government should devote more money to improve the Internet access, because it is the tendency of technology. In my opinion, I think improving public transportation is much more important than Internet access, and I will show my point of views in the following paragraph.
Firstly, the public transportation is the foundation of our routine lives. Because students have to go to school by school buses, adults will take buses to their companies and merchants have to deal with business through long distance transport. Therefore, without the support of public transportation, all the convenience will be gone, which we usually take for granted. For instance, ten years ago, my cousin had to go to primary school on foot for thirty minutes with a tired body, because there was no bus in my town at that time. But now ,with the prosperous of my country, there is even an airport in my town, so he could even get back from his university by plane on his summer vacation. So, the public transportation really makes contribution to citizens to travel to different places more conveniently.
Secondly, there are still many problems that need to be solved in the public transportation. In many cities, traffic jam is a serious problem. When people get up early taking a bus to their companies, sometimes it will take more than one hour to get to the work place, because there is no other ways for them. So, if the government could invest more money to the public transport, such as making a comprehensive plan about regularizing the public roads or building subway station which needs a great effort to whole society, people could have more leisure time instead of squeezing in the crowd in a bus for a long time.
Admittedly, I will not turn a blind eye to the benefits that Internet will bring. Making it accessible to more people means more people could have a view of the world, and they could also play some games or watch some movies for fun through the Internet. However, compared with the basic needs that the public transportation will bring to people, I think the Internet should be put in the second place.
In a nutshell, given the reasons I have mentioned above, the overwhelming benefits of improving public transport is not only the basic demand but also the current problem about people’s daily lives compel me support the government invest money in the public transport.

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