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Question:Summarise the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they cast doubt on specific points made reading passage.When asked about whether it is indispensable for youngsters to get the
habit of plan and organization, majority of people are wholeheartedly big fans
of this issue, while some people are totally against with it. According to my perspective, I definitely fall intothe first category. And the reasons are as follows:
To begin with, the young generation is required to be efficient and effective by modern society. And there is no doubt that learning how to plan and organize can make a youth become more considerate and more responsible. It also means he is working without waste and using a minimum of time, effort and expense. By this way, he definitely will be more helpful than before. Just like American Ex-president Franklin Roosevelt said: No country, however rich, can afford the waste of its human resources. Therefore, as a young citizen who cares about his own country, should notice the significance of planning and organization.
Another more subtle point is that to realize one\\\'s dream, nothing is moreprofitable than to own a long-rangeand foreseeable plan. A survey conducted by experts from Oxford Universityshows that over 90% of elites and enterprisers had precise objects and made plansfor decades later at very young age. Like Steven Jobs and Bill Gates, the mostprominent persons I have ever seen, both of them discontinued their studiessince they were definite aware of what they should do in order to become theleader of IT field.


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