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Some people think that it is better to educate boysand girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girlsbenefit more from attending mixed schools.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
The debate about whether children should beeducated in separate schools or mixed schools is one that has been going on fora long-lasting period. In this essay, I will discuss this issue from bothperspectives before giving my own opinion.
Those who hold the view of attending separateschools are better tend to present the following reasons. Environment ofseparate schools is more simple, meaning less distraction to the students,which provides a better environment for them to concentrate on studying. Inaddition, since boys and girls are biologically different in the pace ofdevelopment, courses and pedagogic method could be tailor-made according to theactual situation. They may also argue that separate schools have been ahistorical tradition such as Eton, from where lot of business and politicalelites graduated.
However, the drawbacks of separate schoolsare obvious because of their monotonicity. Children in separate schools cannotexperience how to get along with the opposite sex during school times. Althoughopposite sex teachers may exist, they cannot take the place of companions atthe same age. Moreover, children in mixed schools can learn to do tasks andcollaborate with the opposite sex from an early age which would benefit themmuch in working places later. Furthermore, it is undeniable that diversity ofenvironment plays an important role in the development of children. Mixedschools with both sex of children have more varieties such as ideas andbehaviors from the opposite sex for children to learn from. Such complex conditionsare also ideal for children to explore creativities and potentials, whichcannot be provided by separate schools.
Considering the views of the two side, Ifirmly believe that mixed schools, which help to develop physical andphycological health are better for children to attend.

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