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Question:<p>Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?</p><p>The opinions of celebrities, such as famous entertainers and athletes, are more important to younger people than they are to older people. </p><p>Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.</p>With the development of modern society, people\\\'s substatnce lives and spiritrual lives are getting much more various than before. So, the entertainment industy gets hotter consequently. This promot the presence and succed of a lot of famous entertainters and athletes, who are stars in singing, dancing, swimming, film, soccer and many other sports or arts field. So we always see the advertisement and posters about these hot peoples on the street, or even on the internet-based medians. The concert of famous singers are always delivered in immense gyms. Thousand and thousands of people come, even from far away, expect to have a encounter with their icons. Through these \\\" crazy\\\" phenomenons, we can see how hot these entertain guys are today. But, for different age groups, the degrees are differnt. I agree with the statement in the topic that the celebrities are mor important to younger prople than they are to older people. Here are the reasons.

First, I think young people always have what we called\\\" iconic obsession \\\", even though this will still happened to older people, the adults, the degree of younger people are much more deeper. For example, one of my high school classmates love a Chinese sionger and dancer called: \\\"Junkai Wang\\\". She love him so much that she put him to the position of the god. She love him to what degree: he has no drawbacks. If anybody says something not good about her dream boy, a fierce argument will definetly happed to him. From this we can have a short look on how much some young people love their stars. But for older people, the situation is totally differnt. Because of the society experience they have, they will be more cool for a famous entertainers. As a conseqence, we can expect that they are less imoportant to older people.

Second, older people have the responsobility to their family members. They always have their own career which will dominent a long time of him. So they will not have enough time and spirit to run after the stars because we all know this thing is a \\\"time killer\\\" for most people, nolonger old or young. Older people are more intelligent on the contribution of times. Commonly, their will spent their rest time on doing sports, watching a movie, climing mountains ansd so on which can help them to smooth the pressure of their work.

I don\\\'t mean which choice are better, for differnt group of people, for different ages, people\\\'s gaols and  dreams are differnt. They will be changed by time.


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