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Question:<p>Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?</p><p>Technology has made children less creative than they were in the past.</p><p>Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.</p>   When it comes to computer games arguments always haunt us. Although people can’t deny that computer games do good to the improvement of children\\\'s imagination and curiosity the computer game may have more negative effects on most of children than its positive sides. Considering children\\\'s immature mentality and body they can hardly to have a good use of computer games. So as far as I can see, it is apparently a waste of time for children to play computer games. This can be seen not only from their little self-control ability and recognition ability but also the time that usually taken by playing computer games.
  To commence with, young children are in the phase when their body and mentality are growing and developing gradually. It is not strange that they have little ability to recognize and discern what is beneficial and what is detrimental for them. What appeals to them are happiness and enjoyment. Taking the computer games for example, with the development of the computer painting ability computer games have not only realistic special effects but also exquisite images, which can exert great influence on children\\\'s feeling. They have more interest on things that can be touched or felt instead of abstract theories or models. Once they find it can be a hard process to escape from it. Moreover children have a more powerful imagination they usually tend to pretend to be a superman or even a dinosaur. However, the can be them in the computer game-the virtual world where they can become the one they want to be. It is reasonable. You know with little life experience they think the world can be what they imagine. So it usually takes them a large amount of time to stay in it-their dream world. Every can be possible. You know it also can be a big attraction for an adult to enter his dream world. But we adult can response quickly and realize that it is not true. So it not only children but also the computer game itself should account for children\\\'s addiction in computer games.
  What is more, the time for playing a computer game can be very long. To better obtain profit and customers game companies design various kinds of computer games which all have a similarity-taking long time to complete all tasks in it. If the game can be done in few hours or minutes, you may find it boring and will be unwilling to pay too much attention on it. Thus nearly all games need a long time to complete. For example, in a game you may be a beggar at the beginning, you need to complete all kinds of tasks to enhance you position and some even need for money. Finally you can obtain the throne and be an emperor. This may take you nearly one to two months to totally finish it. So for children they may spend nearly all their free time to do it and with the strong of their role in the game they are more unwilling to give it up. To better figure out this problem great efforts should be taken to design some games which not only take little effort to do it but also contribute a lot to children\\\'s intellectual development. More rules and criterions should be published to ensure that children will not be addicted to it. The responsibility should be taken by all of us-parents, children, game companies and society.
From what we have argued above, considering their little self-control, recognition ability and computer games\\\' fascinating features it really can be a tortuous process for them to conquer the obsession to computer games. Of course, we all should work together to build a healthy environment for our children.



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