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发表于 2018-7-6 14:04 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
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Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair
discuss both these views and give your own opinion




People have different views with regard to the question of is it reasonable for famous athletes get much more income than some professions in other essential areas. While more money earned by professionals in sports is considered unequal, I would have to support that the remuneration policy to famous athletes is fair enough.

There are various reasons why folks in favor of professors in other fields should get more interests. Firstly, higher profits in other professional areas like medicine, education and communication may be largely incentivized meet develop goals and encourage scientists to cope with more serious issues. Secondly, huge profits may drive undergraduate and graduate students to focus on one particular field and fulfill the demands of society in the future. Finally, many critics call into question the rationality of high compensation of sports stars and point out the values they create are limited.

In spite of these argument, I believe that the remuneration policy to sports professionals is available. From a personal perspective, some athletes win the prize in some tough competitions and they are deserved to get paid. On the societal level, a famous sports star can get remuneration in various ways like advertising. Big Companies tend to have a huge budget for famous stars’ popularity to make their products spread far and wide. In my opinion, sports stars have ability to get higher compensation which is totally considered to comply with the rules of free market.

In conclusion, I can understand why people might think other professionals in some important areas deserve better in salary. But it seems to me that the revenue of successful sportsman is acceptable.

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