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Question:<p>Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?</p><p>The opinions of celebrities, such as famous entertainers and athletes, are more important to younger people than they are to older people. </p><p>Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.</p>Recently, the celebrities have become the focus os the society. In my relationship circle, their many people share with me that there are some stars they really like everyday. In my opinion, I think young people are more likely to take the celebrities as a more important position.

Initially, as a member of young people, I can catch many moments in my life about the celebrities. For example, I can see many moment about the celebrities that my classmates share. I means that their really like them and they are very important for their life. They allways follow their moment on the  Internet. I think they even can\\\'t leave them in the life. My best friend Selina almost share the songs and photos of her idlo every day to me and ask me my feeling.  Therefore, I think the celebrities are the things very popular in the young people\\\'s life today and like the popularity of the fashion fo young people, it\\\'s very important for them.

Moreover, I can\\\'t see too much about the celebrites in the old people\\\'s life. As my grandmother for example, I always talk to her about the life in the school, talk about the idols I like and she just doesn\\\'t know too much about them. The celebrities in their life are some stars who are already retire, so there are no too much news about them. Naturally, they will not that important for old people.

Finally, athough they have some celebrities that are very improtant for them, I think I should be the celebrities about political. The old people prefer to know the news about political and the relationship between the country. However, that are not too important for them because they are not like to know these news and love these famous celebrities,they just want to pay attention on the national events. Thus, I think the celebrities are not important to them, they are necessary to them.

From what has been discussed, I think the celebrities is much more important for young people than for old people today. It is not only because of the popularity of the stars in the young poeple\\\'s life but also because of the different interest for differnet age of poeple. Meanwhile, some of the old people just take the celebrities as the necessary events which are about the national events in their life.


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