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Given from the two maps reveal a comparison of an island before and after the construction of certain tourist equipment.
In the past,the island,which was adjacent to the vehicle track,was s bleaker that only several coconut trees locating in the West and East of the land respectively could be found inside.A beach was connected closely to the western part of the island.Except for walking on the footpath around,tourists could hardly do anything else there.Additionally,it was worthy saying that two pieces of sea areas were surrounding the island with separately situated to the noth and south.
Apparently,things changed dramatically these years.This original barren island right now turns out to be a paradise for tourists. A pier used for linking the seaside and the island was built,thus providing visitors a pathway to the entrance of the island.Besides,some boat can also be used as the transportation to get in.Once people enter,a reception centre appears.The restaurant is just the reception if they pass through it.Accomodations provided by the island are mainly distributing on both left and right of the reception centre,creating sufficient convenience and rest places for the tourists.As for the beach,its surrounding area has been exploited into a safty swimming area in which tourists are able to enjoy variety of aquatic sports there.
To sum up,comparing these two maps,changes happened here is obvious.Not only much more facilities were brought in,but also the sea area was utilized for human recreation,which has added more glamous for the island.
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