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Task2
Some people get into debt by buying things they don't need and can't afford.
What are the reasons for this behaviour?
What action can be taken to prevent people from having this problem?



Recently, news always covers stories like a worker in the factory used up his money to buy an iphone. It seems that people tend to purchase things which are useless and hard to afford. Does this behavior related to social status?
Human beings are born with a sense of self-esteem. When being in a social life. People are eager to gain respect from others. Therefore an efficient way is to own some unique properties which shows their luxuries life. More importantly, it reflects their superficial intelligence in making money. For instance, movie stars usually buy expensive cars to show their unique lives. Even some small stars who lack the money will try to keep up with the steps of international stars. It is the potential desire to show their social status that force people to do unreasonable things such as cost a lot of money on buying things they do not need.
However, we have to admit that the external environment have influence on people’s behavior. If people judge a friend’s social status by their knowledge or other spiritual things, the situation may be different. Thus preventing comparison on material objects between friends is one way to avoid the problem. As long as the whole society eliminates personal incomes as one of the standards to define the social status, people then find there is no need to buy those meaningless things. Therefore the problem is solved.
In conclusion, consuming reasonable is definitely essential in today’s commercial world. Changes in personal values on consuming are needed. We cost money to meet our needs instead of being beyond of our abilities. Only when we buy things we need will we avoid getting into debt.   

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