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The line chart illustrates some details about energy consumption of fuel in the USA from 1980 to 2008, with projected consumption until 2030.
During the five decades, petrol and oil used the most before (35QU) andit will be the largest consumption fuel in the future, followed by coal and natural gas, nuclear, solar or wind, and hydropower. It appeared initial fluctuation before 1996, and then rose to 50QU.
As for fossil fuel, coal and natural gas, they stay a middle stage that coal began 16 QU, while natural gas with 20QU, but it exceeded natural gas in 2015 reach about 30QU, even though their quantities have a fluctuantfigure.
The lowest usage is the fuel applied high technology, such as nuclear, solar or wind, hydropower. The first two fuels all have minimum of usage rate, moderate increase, finally stood at approximately 5QU. Meanwhile, hydropower went through a wavy period time from 1980 to 2010, after this, it is expected that a steady trend remain still in the year 2030.
In general, traditional fuel includes petrol oil, coal and natural gas occupythe main market, with nuclear and sustainable resources are still insignificant.



老师,这篇作文写的时候的的疑惑就很多,觉得consumption 、 fuel这样的词不知道怎么转化说话,另外,这是篇跨越过去和将来时间段的图表, 时态应该怎么用呢?   
谢谢老师!
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