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Today, more and more people find it difficult to achieve a work-life balance. What are the cause of this? Suggest some solutions.

As we can see from recent news, many celebrities and entrepreneurs failed in achieving a work-life balance. They suffer from illness, divorce and mental problems, etc. Average people are also afflicted by this problem in recent years for many reasons. I will show some main causes below.
Competition in job market is increasingly fierce in these years, so people have to be more hard-working in case of replacing by others. Because of high peer pressure, many of them give up annual leave and often work overtime. Even so, most companies still encourage their employees to participate in team building and social networking activities in their rest time. If someone refuse to join, he will be regarded as a disagreeable person, which makes negative effect on his career. As a result, they have little time spending on their personal life.
Furthermore, an increasing number of people believe that wealth is the only standard of success. Commercial advertisements constantly imply owning their expensive products means owning social status, success and happiness. Being misled by them, many people pay too much attention on materials that they ignore other important things of life like health and family.
However, there are many methods can help people achieve work-life balance. Governments should make relative laws to protect employees’ right of rest. For example, increasing public holidays and punishment for forcing worker work overtime. Furthermore, companies ought to consider the condition of their workforce, setting reasonable goals and arranging suitable work for each employee. Besides that, individuals should be well aware of the real meanings of life and find their own ways to keep work-life balance.


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