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   题目 The main purpose of television is to educate no to entertain

    Few scientific and technological achievement equal the invention of television,which brings us into a colorful world.But the development of technology has always accompanied the debates.Some people argue that television is used for education,whereas others insist that its function is for entertainment.I am on the latter side.For every individual who holds the former view seems to ignore the undeniable fact that when opening the television,most programs come to our eyes are about entertainment.It is easy to interpret this phenomenon.
    Tracing back to the original intention of contriving the television,television is invented mainly for watching movies and news.Despite the development of modern cinema,television still maintains its tradition of amusement and is proceeding to present various styles,like talk show and talent show.
People are accustomed to watch entertainment programs.Nowadays the sudden flowing of education  programs can hardly replace this mainstream on television.Generally,breaking the convention is far from an easy task in that most broadcast companies may not bet their profits with educational programs,which will loose a large number of audiences.
    With constantly human developing,people undergo much more pressure than before and are always occupied with amounts of work.They barely have the time to play outside for relaxing.So watching TV seems to be the only way to have fun.It is hard to imagine that people backing home with a exhausted body are willing to watch some boring educational programs!At this time,exciting sports programs like NBA are always their choices,which can relieve themselves from pressure of work and study.And were entertainment were not existent,surely these people would have found other amusement,but never the educational programs.
    Even though for people who really want to learn something from television,watching education programs is neither effective to accumulate knowledge.This is because TV programs are always accompanied advertising,and no exception in educational program.When people are immersed in some content,such an advertising could interrupt thinking thread.Then people may never back to concentrate that program and things have learned are in vein.So why not just watch some comedies for relaxing? Gaining energy from the these funny programs,people can turn to get education in many other ways,such as asking for the teachers and reading books.
     But some attractive educational programs do exist.Nation Geographic Channel and Discovery Channel,which in high audience rating,not only entertain but also convey useful information to people.Just because both follow a acceptabel and recreational form to audience.


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