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The charts displayed how changes the units of electricity production by fuel source in Australia and France between 1980 and 2000.

According to the first country, the data in units of electricity by coal source were the most consumption in the all fuel sources and the figures were upward trend from 50 units to 130 units in Australia between 1980 and 2000. Similarly, the figures in units of electricity by hydro power increased slightly from 20 units to 36 units, while the data of the two other fuel sources, oil and nature gas, decreased significantly by 10 units in Australia between 1980 and 2000.

Interestingly, it can be clearly seen the second country that there was a new fuel source – nuclear power that the proportion in electricity consumption was only 15 units in France in 1980. However the figures in the units of electricity by nuclear power reached the peak at 126 units in 2000. In addition, the data of coal consumption didn’t change and the figures in units of electricity by oil source rose slightly from 20 units to 25 units. Nonetheless, the percentage in nature gas and hydro power consumption declined dramatically and there were only 2 units.

Overall, it can be clearly seen that although the units of total electricity production were similar, from 100 units to 170 units in Australia and from 90 units to 180 units in Frank respectively. The kind of fuel sources was different. The main electricity production was coal in Australia, while there was most consumption in nuclear power in France.


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