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In the modern society, young people benefit from the high-advanced technology, whereas they also suffer the pressure the societies put on.
Therefore, I agree that the rules that societies expect today young people to follow and obey are too strict.
Compared with their parents, young people nowadays need to learn more skills to survive. The most significant skill that everyone should obtain must be the Internet. People use Internet not only for entertainment, but also for scholarship and work. In that case, we have to search useful information in limited time.However, its a challenge to distinguish the information from right to wrong. Besides, people are forced to get access to current news. Because the policy changes very quickly, and if we didnt hear of the current news, we would make some mistakes and get punishment. Especially for young people, studying in every minute is very necessary. Its an approach to keep the pace of our fast-developed society.
Whats more, young people need to build their social network in a different way. They have to sign up on Facebook, Twitter,etc. With those communication tools, they can connect with their friends and colleagues. Checking the mailbox must be a habit for many of them. They pay much attention to avoid ignoring any information. Take myself as an example. My class monitor is used to send important information in our class QQ group. But there are a lot of prattles in the group either. Its really inefficient to filter all those trash info to select the useful ones. Once I didnt check the QQ group, and I just missed a middle test!
In addition,young people are required to be more fierce and competitive. Finding a good job is not an easy thing in the contemporary society. At a very young age, young people need to work hard in school competing with each other. Otherwise, they will not be able to enter good universities, which will lead to the elimination in the job market. When they involve into the workplace successfully, they still need to make great efforts in order to get high pay. Its a burden for young people to buy houses and cars. The price is far beyond their income. They have to save most of the money they earned, which results in less entertaining, but more frustrating.
In a word, the modern society requires young people with too many skills and efforts. Young people have no choice but to work harder and harder to follow and obey those rules. They feel more depressed and less happy. And thats a big issue we need to solve.

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